http://jefi_jun.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jefi-jun.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lukomnikov 2006-04-20 09:14 am (UTC)

мне кажется, твоя 4 строка как-то очеловечивает хайку, приближает к народу :)))
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