http://r-l.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] r-l.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lukomnikov 2006-04-15 02:12 pm (UTC)

Нет, второй стих - не ямб со спондеем. В ямбе, хоть со спондеем, хоть чего должно быть 9 слогов при женском окончании. А тут - 10.
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